There are several things that I love and hate about my novel. I don't believe my artwork to be the greatest thing in the world. However, I do like my plot. It's simple(ish). Thanks to Professor Larson, it was easier to get my thoughts onto the paper, and into a proper writing style. With the help of others around me I was able to make the story easier to understand. Thanks to critiques, I was able to make the story better well rounded and by thinking out loud to myself the title page just sort of came about. Instead of including a Prologue, as suggested by Nathaniel Warburton, I integrated that into the flashbacks themselves. (This a story board base for the flashback).
All of that being said, I fear that some won't like it because it feels a bit rushed, but where else was I going to go with it? Let my characters keep arguing with each other until they're both out of breath? Nah, better to end the fight as logically as possible.
If I were to redo this whole thing (which I may later on) I would add color and maybe a few more pages. I would eventually like to add more and make it into a series that focuses on different characters. Otherwise, I would say that I'm pretty happy with what I've done. I mean, granted, this is no Alan Moore piece, but it's mine, and I like it.
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